Going to the same college,
but not talking each other,
the only thing they now, was that they went walking to the same way after college.
My mom on the right hand and my dad on the left,
sometimes they look at each other,
but not even a word,
the years began to pass and she cross to his street,
at the first they didn´ttalk so much,
but then they were like best friends.
The only problem was thet he was in love with her,
and hi didn´t now how to tell her ,
he loves looking at her,
at her smile,
at the way se laugh.
He didn´t support the idea of not beeing together,
he told her that he was in love with her,
she smiled,
kissed him,
and told him "I was waiting yo for telling me that for a long time.
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Very good work. You took your time to create suspense and kept me reading stanza after stanza to see how this story ended. Congratulations on your effort.
ResponderEliminarThere are some spelling mistakes or verbs in infinitive that should be in the past, consider this for further publications.
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